TheStrawberryBazooka's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A2&2B]

Nice!

[Holo]

Really Cute!

Useing deeper shadows will really help, especially in the shadow that starts right above her knee, it kind of looks flat.
Also she looks like she doesn't have a neck, right now the rounded edges on the scarf makes it appear like she has no neck

The colors are amazing!!!

[Purple Mane]

Um..... Dose she have 4 ears?
Love the colors!

Scarfyfulness responds:

Yes! Yes she does have four ears! Why? ...heck if I know. And thank you!

[(+video) Reya Character Sheet]

Good job! From what I've see you have a lot of potential and if you keep at it this could be phenomenal!

Okay, now for some critiques.
Design: in the picture of of her back, her belt is far higher then the other pic. Is the chain holding her....scythe? If so it would be taut holding the weight. About the slit in the back, yes it looks cool from the back but from the front it looks off, maybe making the inner skirt long and the same purple? Her high heel on the right should be straight down not diagonal. Her sleeves are a bit long (in my opinion) maybe make them so just her finger tips come out? I know it's hard but maybe chose a different more natural eye color. Impossible and whimsical eye colors instantly give off the impression of a over powered or Mary Sue character. Giving her a natural color will make her more believable. Finally, don't be afraid of using sharp deep shadows! It will add so much depth to your art!

Character: minor, if you had written in black or gray it would have tied into her leggings and the power smoke. My biggest critique is that Sou makes up half of Reya's character sheet, by the end I thought Reya's last name was Sou. Only by going and looking at your other art did I realizes Sou is someone else. I would look up some videos on how to write a bio, your phrasing is a bit off. Just a warning now, she does BORDER on being a Mary Sue.

I'm writing this to help, not to be mean.

ANTREPEYOUS responds:

Yes! Thank you very much for the critique. I will do some research on how to improve my Bios and taking your suggestions into account. I will also try to use sharper and deeper shadows like you mentioned. Thank you very much for the critique again, it's kinda rare for me to get his level of critique.

[Albedo]

Your hands are outstanding!!
I'd work on shading variation and the nose. I think her head is a bit small for the proportions.
And lastly the thing I struggle with too, try keep the eyes even size and placement.

DocWinther responds:

Thank you for your feedback 👍. And the eyes - ohh yes. The struggle is real 😵😁😎.

[Saya Lockeheart - Day 26; Cross Dressing]

Pretty good.
Looks at hands.... you watch Xabio arts? 😊
I'd work on your noses. Also the form, needs more definition.

YumichanStudios responds:

Thank you! Yes I do! I hope he posts again soon xc. hmm okay I will keep that in mind next time!

[Venom]

Cool! Love it!
Some suggestions, try useing more block/cell shading, you have the shapes, and pretty good colors, but useing the airbrush gives a ghostly effect, he looks transparent. Also try useing more grays.
Just trying to be helpful!
P.S, do you think Anti-Venom is going to be in the movie? I hope so! I also hope it's rated PG-13 not R so I can watch it.

[fear]

A very beautiful pice!
Some critiques: the biggest one would be, give the girl whites in her eyes, especially because the dude has them. It just looks odd...
Two, do more smooth shading in the hair, (the skin is all smooth shading, and Most of the hair has no shading) don't be afraid to use rather dark shadows.
One last thing I caught, look at the girls head where her hair curls in, then look at the pocket of skin caught in between, I'm pretty sure thats your skin base. It just looks odd.
I'm trying to be helpful, it is a very good drawing!

NameSpaceNG responds:

well, thanks, ill just take these critiques into consideration for future drawings. and the person on the left is a girl lmao

[Happy 4th!!]

Well drawn, love the colors!!
Thanks! Happy 4th to you too!
Funny thing, where I'm on vacation it rained on the 4th, but there was a small 40 minute break in the rain, and in that break the sound was deafening! Everyone was trying to fire all their fireworks before the after 4th ban started. And when it started raining again some people were still firing fireworks!

Zaccura responds:

Hahaha that sounds like a memorable experience XD
I actually went to see fireworks on the 3rd and it rained for some time as well, thankfully it was only for a short time so they didn't have to cancel anything, I was huddling my sketchbook like a football player tho to keep it dry (hastag artist life) XD

And thank you!! :D